Score: 7

"Random, and funny to boot!"

submission: Dino! Shorts

date: September 23, 2008

I liked it. The art and everything was pretty random, but it was well done random, not like SOME things you find on Newgrounds. Keep at it!

Score: 8

"Good job!"

submission: Spin Me (like a record)

date: September 12, 2008

I liked it. Some parts repeated a few too many times, but overall the art and animation worked for the song. And the song is awesome, of course. :)

The part with the guy's head spinning freaked me out. That's some look he's got there... His drooling on the bench made me laugh.

Score: 9

"Wonderfully done"

submission: Samson the Foolish

date: July 22, 2008

The whole thing clearly had a ton of effort put into it, and told a great story. I had just been listening to the tale of Samson on the radio the other day, so it was awesome to see it in animated form as well. Nice work! Judges is a weird book, huh? Really different than the later ones, that's for sure...

:)

Score: 8

"Liked it a lot!"

submission: Sling Jumper 2

date: July 10, 2008

I really enjoyed this game. It was fun, and addicting to a degree because I kept falling and shaking my fist at the screen. :)

The "luck" levels kind of ruined some of the fun for me, because there was pretty much no timing involved as they moved so fast. I understand the idea, but it seemed like that could have been better in a later stage or something. I dunno.

Anyway, nice work. If it wasn't just a ball as the object, I'd probably have gone with a 9/10 or 10/10 because it was really fun. So if you make a SJ3, you should make it a little guy or something! That could be really funny.

Keep up the good work!

Score: 6

"Awesome effects..."

submission: Inmortal (Original)

date: July 8, 2008

... but it's another stick man fight! I'm just so tired of them, I'm sorry. So clearly this wasn't for me. But you have some really great talent at effects, because they were really cool. So I'd keep at it, but maybe steer AWAY from pointless stick men? I mean, you could do so much more with your incredible style...

Score: 8

"Not bad"

submission: Stickman Madness 3

date: July 8, 2008

It's entertaining enough, but it seems pretty standard for these types of games. They appear to be everywhere now. Not to discredit all the work you clearly did. I like the upgrade system and such. Seems like it needs some story, or maybe just not stick people. I'm kind of tired of stick people, and you seem to have the talent to do so much more. The main character could be an actual character, and have a story as to why he's defending everything so you could feel attached to him as a person. Instead of a stick.

Anyway, keep at it. Like I said, it was good, and well done. Just needs more style, I think. :)

Score: 9

"Would have been a 10 if it were longer!"

submission: Crumbs!

date: April 11, 2008

This was GREAT! You have a wonderful art style and professionalism. Good work!

If it were longer, I'd say it was a perfect 10. Amazing. Keep it up!
-JKR

Score: 7

"Good game, lacking intro"

submission: Mahjong-Animal-Connect

date: April 11, 2008

The game was well made, and enjoyable, if not kind of predictable since it's just the same as any Mahjong game. Still, nice work. It is fun and works well!

At the same time, a lot more care needs to go into your intro and titlescreen/logo. They are very plain, and the initial impression you get is "low quality" even though the game itself is not. Remember, first impressions are important. Make your loading screen very nice to look at.

Good luck!

Score: 6

"Art = Fantastic!"

submission: Larvae

date: April 7, 2008

Your art was superb! The style was amazingly well done, and your color choices were excellent. I can't speak about them highly enough. Most of the animation was also incredible, and you should be proud of it.

At the same time, that was one of the most boring things I've seen in a while. Had it not been for your "please watch the whole thing" comment, I would have stopped partway into the fishes. Maybe I missed a deeper meaning, but it seemed totally random to me, and didn't hold me outside of the art. I'm sorry, I'm sure there are others who loved the randomness of it all.

Again, your art was great, I can't stress that enough. Nice work.

PS. Shout out to Zekey! I haven't talked to him since the 5-Shades days when I was Space_chicken instead of simply "JKR". :)

Score: 9

"Good work!"

submission: Robot Jim!

date: April 4, 2008

That was very well done! I only played the first level (I've got to get back to work myself) but you did an excellent job on everything from the art to the actual game itself. Nice!

Two suggestions. One, that you tone down the sound effects. They got a touch annoying. The screams mostly. Two work on the story a bit more. If it were animated and not "Hey, space aliens are attacking, okay bye" then it might give more incentive to continue instead of quitting early.

Cheers! Keep up the good work!