Score: 9

"Terrific"

submission: the Last of the Dashkin

date: December 11, 2009

Another brilliant piece, and while I wasn't a fan of the narration at the start, it was a great idea by the end. I can't wait to see more.

Perhaps it is the length of time you did it in, but the animation wasn't up to your usual level. By Newgrounds standard, of course, it is still above and beyond most anything else, but compared to previous work of your own, it wasn't as smooth and well done. Just a few thoughts. Regardless, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Score: 8

"Really enjoyed this"

submission: What's the Worst?

date: December 5, 2009

I thought it was really well done, and kudos for going beyond the storyboard your class required. I liked the different attempts at getting the soda out of the machine (especially the failed jump kick) but the ending was a little bit predictable, so maybe next time something unexpected could happen instead of what everyone was kind of waiting for. Great start and keep at it! :)

Score: 9

"Amazing work"

submission: LARRY episode 1

date: November 16, 2009

This is one of the best productions I've seen on Newgrounds, and I've been around here a while. You've got a great talent for this sort of things, so nice job. The only part that I didn't particularly enjoy was the odd scene between Larry and the dismembered head of his father. That... well, it kind of made the character less likable. I didn't care about him as much after that, which is something you should always shoot for in a story. I'll be honest, I think you should take that out. Or switch it to some other character.

Great job overall.

Score: 4

"An okay start..."

submission: Airpack

date: March 17, 2009

Still needs work. You have the basic mechanics down, but it's lacking in sound and depth. Keep at it and you could probably come up with a cool game.

One thing, though: That preloader is total BS. It should NEVER take that long to load something that small. I almost closed it just because that was clearly just a fake preloader with an ad above it. Take that out, it's lame.

Score: 9

"Very nice start!"

submission: Abnormality Episode -1-

date: January 23, 2009

I liked it a lot. A few suggestions: Work on the pacing. The opening was a little too slow-paced. It's okay to make it long, but the pauses in between characters talking needed shortened. Also, as someone said before, change up the characters a bit more. They look too similar.

Overall VERY well done, I can't wait to see more.

Score: 7

"It was okay"

submission: Zone of the Awesome

date: January 20, 2009

Much better than a lot of what goes through this site, but still not the greatest. That's okay though, as you said, you wanted feedback from it. Your sound quality needs upped, because it's too fuzzy. The animation worked alright, but (obviously) it's the style of the Awesome series, and compared to that (which you have to do, since it's based on it) it isn't as good. If this were an original piece not based on the Awesome series, I would say it was much better. It's only the direct comparison that has it lacking. Good luck in the future! :)

Score: 10

"Brilliant"

submission: Sometimes, y

date: January 15, 2009

THIS is why I come to Newgrounds. Amazing, kudos to you good sir.

*clap*

Score: 7

"Random, and funny to boot!"

submission: Dino! Shorts

date: September 23, 2008

I liked it. The art and everything was pretty random, but it was well done random, not like SOME things you find on Newgrounds. Keep at it!

Score: 8

"Good job!"

submission: Spin Me (like a record)

date: September 12, 2008

I liked it. Some parts repeated a few too many times, but overall the art and animation worked for the song. And the song is awesome, of course. :)

The part with the guy's head spinning freaked me out. That's some look he's got there... His drooling on the bench made me laugh.

Score: 9

"Wonderfully done"

submission: Samson the Foolish

date: July 22, 2008

The whole thing clearly had a ton of effort put into it, and told a great story. I had just been listening to the tale of Samson on the radio the other day, so it was awesome to see it in animated form as well. Nice work! Judges is a weird book, huh? Really different than the later ones, that's for sure...

:)