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Well drawn

Your images are all very well done. It appears you spent a long time on them. That said, the animation might benifit from a little improving. It works, and was fine, but perhaps more movement would help. Like when the character's busts are shown with the full figure in the back, the figure could be moving/fighting/something. (Also I don't really like credits that give props to 'me'). Just a thought- nice job all around though.

josh-tamugaia responds:

But I guess that's good for my work that is years back! Thanks Chicken!

War is bad

But this is good. Nice work! All of the animation was smooth and well done. Even the cool intro. The only two suggestions I have is 1) make the buttons not just txt hit state, because that's annoying and 2) perhaps change the name to something original, because the toon is so well done and everything. Include the name of the movie in the credits instead of the cartoon title. Really though, great work.

Not bad, well done animation

Your animating is well done, but the story is a little under developed. I can see where you could take this to cool places though, in a series or otherwise. Maybe just spice it up a little and work on the pacing. I like the eskimo design.

Enough is enough

What is UP with this series?? I'm assuming either the people voting so highly of them are friends of the author or maybe HOPELESS romantics or something. I however, do not like them. Sorry. They're slow and NOTHING MORE THAN A MOTION TWEEN with some music and a picture. Why not use your talents for some Flash that's a little more animated? I'm sure you'd be good at it if you tried.

Krayzd-Wolvf responds:

We already did, check out 'Toad's Rage'. We'll be making a sequel to it when we take a break from this series.

Not bad, but not great

It looks like you've got talent at this from these clips but they're obviously (as explained in the title) unfinished. Um... I don't know what else to say. I'd like to see the first one finished. It was interesting.

I'm not a fan of animated manga

I really really like manga. But I like manga for what it is. I just don't think taking it in this direction works. At least not for me. Sorry. The flash is pretty well done and everything, but I just prefer to have my manga in book form that I can go at my own pace. Really it's that point that breaks it for me- that I can't go at my own pace.

Wow nice job!

That was really well done! I can see why it took you so long. The graphics were really nice. I'm not a huge fan of the name "Flyboy" cause I was expecting some kind of mutant half-insect creature, but all in all a very good job.

Are you sure this is your first Flash?

"This is my first attempt at Flash" always makes me cringe at what might be coming. But this was good. Very nice for your first shot. A little slow at times, and I think the masking was overused a bit, but I look forward to the actual movie.

McLey responds:

Yup, it's the first. ;)

Nice job on the "characters"

The "characters" (if that's what you'd call them) were really well done. I'm not a huge fan of the electronic voices, but other than that- good job. Oh and with the "flashback" part, I think you meant earlier that night, not later, right?

StampedHand responds:

Fuck! Ha ha, I didn’t even realize I put later that night. I'll fix it now. Thanks.

Well done animating!

This cartoon is really well done. My favorite part is the kid with the glasses and "funny" smile. Hilarious.

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