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Pretty good job overall!

The little story was funny and your character was well drawn. The fire in the opening was GREAT. Perhaps next time you could use some actual typeface for THE END because hand drawn words look kinda bad. You've got a great start here, keep at it!

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

A great Start?

Dont you recognize me, Space? From the Shades collab thing. We are bruddahs from the same collab, yo foshizzle!

Good art, crappy audio

I really like your style, and you're either an AMAZING figure animator or that character was done in 3D (which isn't a bad thing, just a little easier). The only thing that kills this piece is the txt for talking. That totally ruins what you've started! The work is soooo good that suddenly crappy drawn word bubbles and text appearing sucks away the mood. I'd check the forums for some voice actors, they're always willing to help! =) Keep up the good work.

One of the best sprite movies I've seen

This was really well done! Nice work. Your pacing was good, and the sprite work was above average as well. I'm not usually a fan of sprite pieces, but this one was well put together.

I noticed some spelling errors like "were" instead of "we're" so watch out for those next time, but keep up the good work!

RupeeClock responds:

ITS YOU AGAIN. o_0

Yea, those spelling errors were not my fault but the font I used, ahnberghand, what kind of font doesn't include " ' "?

Yes, many sprite movies don't usually do well, since its was most n00bs resort to for their first flash I beleive, thanks for your advice. :D

Good most of the time!

I really liked it, most of the time. It was a little slow, but the music held it all together. The character models were awsome, but some of the other visual weren't nearly as good as they were. The alien warrior things looked incredible, and you should strive to bring everything up to that level of art. Nice work overal.

Nice job all in all

That was very well done. Looks like you put a lot of effort into it, so nice work. Keep it up.

green-lotus responds:

Thanks. And, yes, I did put a lot of effort into it and I think it payed off.

Nooo! The end??

Don't stop now! They're so hilarious! Oh well, if this was the last one, it was a good one to go out on. I liked it. Except why were the monkey's smiling at the end while they were talking? That was kinda strange.

Very good work

Nice. The humor was great, and your style worked very well with the voices. Well done.

Nice job, especially for something older

Good work. It was funny and just long enough to make it. I liked the elephant. What was that about?? Anyway, keep it up.

Nice animation and style

It was good overall. Your fbf animation was well done, and the whole thing worked out nicely. Keep it up.

Bodie responds:

thanks for the feedback, my movie seems like it should pass judgement, yipee for me, go the donkey horse thing, the bartender and the joke :P.
i dont even know what made me make this movie, i just started animating frame by frame about 3 days ago and decided to make a reasonably sized movie.

Brilliant!

This was GREAT. Oh, I wish I could convince you to keep it up! I know how hard it is to keep being funny, but when you come up with another script that's worth doing- DO IT!
Wooo! This was great...

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JK Riki @JKR

Age 41, Male

Animator

No more school! Yay!

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