Age/Gender: 27, Male
Location: USA
Job: Animator
FredtheMonkey. com is where all the Fred cartoons live, with new ones all the time! Check it out.
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Latest Flash Reviews
Another brilliant piece, and while I wasn't a fan of the narration at the start, it was a great idea by the end. I can't wait to see more.
Perhaps it is the length of time you did it in, but the animation wasn't up to your usual level. By Newgrounds standard, of course, it is still above and beyond most anything else, but compared to previous work of your own, it wasn't as smooth and well done. Just a few thoughts. Regardless, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
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I thought it was really well done, and kudos for going beyond the storyboard your class required. I liked the different attempts at getting the soda out of the machine (especially the failed jump kick) but the ending was a little bit predictable, so maybe next time something unexpected could happen instead of what everyone was kind of waiting for. Great start and keep at it! :)
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This is one of the best productions I've seen on Newgrounds, and I've been around here a while. You've got a great talent for this sort of things, so nice job. The only part that I didn't particularly enjoy was the odd scene between Larry and the dismembered head of his father. That... well, it kind of made the character less likable. I didn't care about him as much after that, which is something you should always shoot for in a story. I'll be honest, I think you should take that out. Or switch it to some other character.
Great job overall.
Author's Response:
i knew it'd be on the limits of where i should go but ya know, i decided i'm doing this for fun and if i enjoy it a few people out there wont mind it. Ofcourse its not a true reflection of his character, but you know what, its a cartoon, people will get over it eventually.
you are right though. i dont regret it in the end, just because, well... who cares, lol! thanks for your review. i appreciate it!
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I really liked it, good job. I wish I could play the guitar now... Anyway, it had a nice flow to it and the style was spot on for a Spanish type melody. Only thing I'd change is adding a few more of the high single notes at the end. Like "Ding... ding ding DING ding..." (Obviously it's not something I can type out, lol.)
But yeah, good job.
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