JKR's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Burrito Bison]

Quite upsetting

How much time I just wasted 100%-ing this game. Amazing work, not many games refuse to let me go like that. I was pretty sad at the end when I had nothing left to do. I'd say throw in a bonus for completing the game, like being able to play a second time through with a new character (that was exactly the same, but then I'd have wasted twice as many hours.)

[Airpack]

An okay start...

Still needs work. You have the basic mechanics down, but it's lacking in sound and depth. Keep at it and you could probably come up with a cool game.

One thing, though: That preloader is total BS. It should NEVER take that long to load something that small. I almost closed it just because that was clearly just a fake preloader with an ad above it. Take that out, it's lame.

[Sling Jumper 2]

Liked it a lot!

I really enjoyed this game. It was fun, and addicting to a degree because I kept falling and shaking my fist at the screen. :)

The "luck" levels kind of ruined some of the fun for me, because there was pretty much no timing involved as they moved so fast. I understand the idea, but it seemed like that could have been better in a later stage or something. I dunno.

Anyway, nice work. If it wasn't just a ball as the object, I'd probably have gone with a 9/10 or 10/10 because it was really fun. So if you make a SJ3, you should make it a little guy or something! That could be really funny.

Keep up the good work!

[Stickman Madness 3]

Not bad

It's entertaining enough, but it seems pretty standard for these types of games. They appear to be everywhere now. Not to discredit all the work you clearly did. I like the upgrade system and such. Seems like it needs some story, or maybe just not stick people. I'm kind of tired of stick people, and you seem to have the talent to do so much more. The main character could be an actual character, and have a story as to why he's defending everything so you could feel attached to him as a person. Instead of a stick.

Anyway, keep at it. Like I said, it was good, and well done. Just needs more style, I think. :)

[Crumbs!]

Would have been a 10 if it were longer!

This was GREAT! You have a wonderful art style and professionalism. Good work!

If it were longer, I'd say it was a perfect 10. Amazing. Keep it up!
-JKR

[Mahjong-Animal-Connect]

Good game, lacking intro

The game was well made, and enjoyable, if not kind of predictable since it's just the same as any Mahjong game. Still, nice work. It is fun and works well!

At the same time, a lot more care needs to go into your intro and titlescreen/logo. They are very plain, and the initial impression you get is "low quality" even though the game itself is not. Remember, first impressions are important. Make your loading screen very nice to look at.

Good luck!

[Robot Jim!]

Good work!

That was very well done! I only played the first level (I've got to get back to work myself) but you did an excellent job on everything from the art to the actual game itself. Nice!

Two suggestions. One, that you tone down the sound effects. They got a touch annoying. The screams mostly. Two work on the story a bit more. If it were animated and not "Hey, space aliens are attacking, okay bye" then it might give more incentive to continue instead of quitting early.

Cheers! Keep up the good work!

[Territory WAR]

I must say, you really got me

I honestly never play Flash games for very long. I just don't find them very interesting. But this game held onto me all the way through mission 10. Great job! (I was even late for a lunch appointment, but I won't blame you for that.) =)

Some of the visuals could be improved a bit, and I hope you keep making them even better, but you have an incredible game here and I must applaud your efforts.

[Weather]

Nice work, keep it up

Hey this was pretty good, especially for such a little file size. Good job! I'd add more options and maybe spruce up the lightening guy a little, but nice overall. Hope to see more.

[Seraph]

Cool, but what's with the score?

I gotta say I'm a bit suprised at the 4.26 that this is currently at. It was good don't get me wrong, but that good? I don't know... Anyway, nice style and graphics as a whole. Your opening was really nice and the movement of Seraph was great in game. I did find it a little boring after a short while, but I don't like clicking-shooters much anyway. Nice though, very nice. Keep up the good work.