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A-mazing.

Incredible job. As a huge fan of Gorey I have to say how much I loved this. It's very well done. I hope people here on NG will appriciate it, because I guess from a flash/animation standpoint it's not that extraordinary but you've found a great style to "borrow" (steal hee hee) and you should keep it up! WOW. Amazing.

Nice nice

I liked it. I liked it a lot! This is really fun, well animated, and generally a good overall package. Now I gotta go wait for the next in the series!

Meh, needs something

Your art is great, and the animation isn't that bad (not enough of it though) but this needs something. Maybe I just don't like the generic voices. Why oh why can't people just record real voices? I bet you can find a mic free out on the street somewhere; seriously. Anyway, good job, now work on improving.

BellClock responds:

The thing about those voices is that it's become a trademark of the Clocks, seriously, not many Clocks or Clockfans would appreciate it if I give a Clock a "regular" voice. But I ALWAYS give people normal voices =)

Very very good start

Now you just need to keep improving and adding to it. Maybe a story and some extra types of powerups and such.

Gots some potential

It's like four not so great animations in one submission. On their own they'd be blammed, but together, not too bad I guess. Just keep working and improving and you'll probably do well. Good luck!

Blam-Master responds:

hey guys

Nice job due to music

The animation was done well, don't get me wrong, but it's the music that pushed this cartoon over the top. Very cool.

You need sound work

I would get a sound screen so when you record your voice work it sounds a little better. All in all it's pretty good. You've got the story thing going well, and maybe a little more complicated animation would help.

Also, I find it interesting that the deepest darkest dungeon has a bloody window looking out to the sky. =)

Pretty good for not caring

I bet this would be even better if you cared about it and it wasn't just for a school project. Pretty good stuff. Obviously could be cleaner, but not too shabby overall.

Good message

It's nice to see some Flash with a message instead of just stick people killing each other. It's much better too, now that you added voices. The sound needs cleaned up a bit, but overall good job. Also maybe you could upgrade the animation a bit- add moving mouths and such.

Good with clay

Hey you seem really good with claymation. Looks like a whole lot of work went into that!

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JK Riki @JKR

Age 41, Male

Animator

No more school! Yay!

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