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You asked for a review, so here you go!

I like when people leave me reviews as well. Anyway, I thought you did a pretty good job. I'd work on the pacing a little, because there were some slow parts. My favorites were the Mario Castle washing and where the rodent bit off his face. But that one didn't make much sense.

Nice work overall though.

ToonCastleTV responds:

oh cool! I know you! sorry about the slow parts, this was made kinda fast. yeah a bit random

How sadly true

I hear you, man. I really wish more people would freakin' bother to vote/review, although I think I'd even prefer if the stupid people just didn't do either. I've gotten some great reviews (positive and negative) that actually give feedback, but I'm sick and tired of the "0's across the board PS. 'you suck!'" folks lurking around NGs.

Anyway, in response to your submission, I liked it. It was very true-funny, and I liked the style of your animation. I think some subtitles might have helped at a few points, but you get the idea of the Flash even if you don't catch every word. Keep it up, and hopefully people will actually listen to the message here which is LEAVE CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK!

stoners-lunchbox responds:

thanks. i'll take that into account next time i have a spoken piece in a submission.

cheers!

SUPER ULTRA EXTREME good.

Heh, I'm glad I submitted MINE yesterday. No daily feature if I was up against you! Really though, great job. This made me laugh a lot, and I'm sure that was the reason for making it. Success!
Keep it up! I want to see a third one now! Actually I'm going to go now and watch the first one.

ChrisNosal responds:

Heh, thanks. I watched your flash yesterday and gave it a 5.

Great! Supurb! Nice!

You did a great job with this. Never saw that ending coming. Very nice work, keep it up. Is the music your own? I just have a thing for using copyrighted music, since you can never call the whole project your own then. But overall great job!

jerbjpg responds:

no... i got the music from some kinda game that was built into a mac G4... cant remember the name though.

Since you said please...

Woo! I am the saviour! I am one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal!
The little saviour movie is kinda fitting since it has the entry getting wings...

Anyway since you asked, I'll leave a review!
I liked this little toon a lot. The graphics and animation left something to be desired, but with a little more work you could get them to be better I'm sure. The story was good, and the emotion came through very well. I've never felt sorry for a little blue blob like I did when I watched this. Nice work, keep it up!

Foreverkul responds:

Graphics on purpose to represent the simple minds of the blobs lol kthxbia! :D

Nice art, depressing flash

There are so many depressing flashes out there... sigh. Anyway your art is really well done, and your animation was ok too. I just didn't really like the story/message because of it's depressing nature. I'd rather laugh. There was a study recently that had people watching stressful things vs. funny things and apparently the funny things help your blood flow and are generally healthier. Anyway, I don't know why I mentioned that. Nice work, I hope to see more from you (with a more humorous theme!)

BlackmarketKraig responds:

DANGER! Don't watch my other movies! They are mostly all depressing as well.

You know, I wasn't aware that there were a lot of depressing ones out there. Most of the time when I'm browsing the portal I see mostly comedy ones... it would be strange if you were missing all the funny ones and I were missing all the sad ones.

Yeah, I'd say people who laugh a lot are healthier and better adjusted.

But we need depressives to make all the great art, right? Where would we be without VanGogh or Edvard Munch? ^_^

Just a thought...

Thanks for reviewing!

Pretty good job overall!

The little story was funny and your character was well drawn. The fire in the opening was GREAT. Perhaps next time you could use some actual typeface for THE END because hand drawn words look kinda bad. You've got a great start here, keep at it!

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

A great Start?

Dont you recognize me, Space? From the Shades collab thing. We are bruddahs from the same collab, yo foshizzle!

One of the best sprite movies I've seen

This was really well done! Nice work. Your pacing was good, and the sprite work was above average as well. I'm not usually a fan of sprite pieces, but this one was well put together.

I noticed some spelling errors like "were" instead of "we're" so watch out for those next time, but keep up the good work!

RupeeClock responds:

ITS YOU AGAIN. o_0

Yea, those spelling errors were not my fault but the font I used, ahnberghand, what kind of font doesn't include " ' "?

Yes, many sprite movies don't usually do well, since its was most n00bs resort to for their first flash I beleive, thanks for your advice. :D

Nice job all in all

That was very well done. Looks like you put a lot of effort into it, so nice work. Keep it up.

green-lotus responds:

Thanks. And, yes, I did put a lot of effort into it and I think it payed off.

Nice animation and style

It was good overall. Your fbf animation was well done, and the whole thing worked out nicely. Keep it up.

Bodie responds:

thanks for the feedback, my movie seems like it should pass judgement, yipee for me, go the donkey horse thing, the bartender and the joke :P.
i dont even know what made me make this movie, i just started animating frame by frame about 3 days ago and decided to make a reasonably sized movie.

I co-Author Animator Island, a site specifically for animators with weekly updates, tips, and tricks. Hope to see you there!

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